I have to revise my original paper based on comments from the professor. The attached document indicates where revisions are necessary (I provided a Word and PDF copy). Comments are embedded in the exact location where needed. The full set of comments is also included at the back of the document. I need a stronger and clearer thesis statement and the points to support it. I also need to show one argument and rebuttal.
My writing style is simple.
The paper is 2-3 pages, 12pt. font with 1″ margins. Up to 3 sources are needed from the attached reading on Plato. Other sources are not needed unless it is necessary for the paper.
Three attachments are included: my original paper (in Word and PDF) and Plato Allegory of the Cave
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