My research paper is about animal cruelty/abuse.

My thesis statement is – “Although human life is a public priority, animal life should be equally valued and protected.” Can you make my thesis statement more specific I was told it was vague?
My research paper is about animal cruelty/abuse. My argument is that animal cruelty is undermined and animal rights should be just as valued as humans, for they can feel and have emotions just like us.
These are the four sources you can use for reference/research
https://search-credoreference-com.ezproxy.wpunj.edu/content/entry/wileycacj/animals_as_victims/0
https://journals-sagepub-com.ezproxy.wpunj.edu/doi/full/10.1177/0306624X11405480https://search-credoreference-com.ezproxy.wpunj.edu/content/entry/sagesdeviane/animal_cruelty/0
https://advance-lexis-com.ezproxy.wpunj.edu/document/?pdmfid=1516831&crid=8e33aa3f-1418-498c-acc5-c9b775b86157&pddocfullpath=%2Fshared%2Fdocument%2Fanalytical-materials%2Furn%3AcontentItem%3A659P-Y8Y1-JJ1H-X4W0-00000-00&pdcontentcomponentid=258909&pdteaserkey=sr1&pditab=allpods&ecomp=rz2yk&earg=sr1&prid=786b495f-2d4f-4fcb-b075-08a5a0c9fcef

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