Did you conduct a more thorough review of the literature focusing on performance management practices as your original feedback suggested?

Your original review did not draw on the recent literature published since 2020  and this could help to refine your question.

What does the literature from the last two years say about the challenges that organizations faced in conducting performance management, and what were the key findings/themes that have emerged?

If it has highlighted issues you could use these to develop a more exploratory set of questions around those themes/issues?

If the literature has not addressed this question then there may be a gap in the literature that you can explore and these questions could help bridge this gap.

They are still predominantly descriptive though and would be enhanced by being more exploratory.